Friday, July 3, 2015

Magic of Luv - part 3

Part 3
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PRECAP
ram - ja raha hu naa...ajeeb musibat gale padi h....
priya - so swt my golu....
ram - khabardar jo golu boli..toh dekh lo....
               
Part3
Priya : bolungi….kya karoge…tease him….
Ram : sochlo fir…
Priya: acha abhi jao nahi toh or late ho jaoge
Ram :  jata hu na…tumhe naa…was trying to say something….as priya stares him….takes his wallet n key quietly…n goes …ja raha hu…ghuro mat ab…
Priya : laughs….gud hubby…

Ram goes and priya closes the door…and turns n looks the house…all toys messed up…says to herself…chal priya shuru ho ja…yr yeh bache naa…kitna saman nikalte hai…jo nikalte hai sab bahar…
Pick up few toys….and goes in kids room n..keep it on the place…look the bed…yeh princess bi ….kitne kapde nikalwati hai…nakhare toh baap ki tarah hai….kuch pasand hi nahi aata jaldi se….and wahi mera ansh…jo nikal do phen leta hai….luks ansh sleeping…goes near him….n kiss him softly…aaj kitna smart lag raha tha…
Takes him in her arms n sit on bed…n thinks….what happened 3 years ago…agar us din aap nahi milte toh shyad yeh zindagi bhi nahi milti….

Flashback….more than 3 years ago..
Today is the world of internet….and social networking ….so linking my story with that…new world of social sites….

Ram and priya used to live in metro cities but not in one city. Both were busy in their lives. Priya used to like someone…but was not sure…about her own feelings..a person whom she liked or loved. She was fond of a serial …tv serial…she liked the story and imagine herself like that.  Her family was conservative in nature. She was not allowed to go out and make frnds. Then she got connected with social networking sites. Where she used to interact with few of her frnds. Where she met Ram…firstly she was not interested in adding him in frnd list. Then later she added him. He was different from others. They started talking. She knew he is a married man with two kids. So, there was no feelings for a relationship. She liked somebody else so she never thought like this nor Ram. In four months ram n priya became gud frnds but till then also Ram didn’t let him know about his problems.
Ram never told about his family problems in the beginning. Then priya told ram that she liked somebody but donot know how to express her feeling nor she was sure that person liked him or not.
Ram said – sidhe se jake puch lo naa…
Priya – kaise puchu…is it so easy….
Ram – dekho yeh tumhe hi karna hai…
Priya – hmm…ok will try…
 Then priya did the same…as ram told him… Priya proposed him…he accepted priyas proposal…priya was very happy.
Priya told everything to Ram…and said bcz of him she is so much happy.
Ram was also not aware of the feeling taking place for priya in his heart. Somewhere he started liking her.

Both likes to spend time with each other. When ram gets time from his work he comes online and talk with her. Then ram gave his number. But both didn’t call each other. One day priya thought of giving him a surprise…and wanted to wish  holi..by calling him…
ram was happy this year…so he played holi….after many years… priya wished him in morng…later she called him….
His wife was not there…ram picked the call…without seeing the number he picked it…
Ram… hello…
Priya….hi….kaise ho aap
Ram …whoz this…
Priya…..phechano….ur spl frnd
Ram …..ohhh toh tum ho…he smiled while saying this…
Priya …phechan liya…smiling…
Ram….kaise yaad kiya aaj…
Priya….socha surprise de du..holi bolke wish kardu…
Ram …achaa…aisa kya
Priya….happy holi….
Ram…same to you….
Both talked for at least half hour….both enjoyed talking to each other.

Priyas thought broke whn door bell rang.
Priya goes to open the door. Its mom n dad…with princess and grandfather.
Mom – dulhin ram thik hai handing her gift and packed food
Priya – ji maa…vo thik hai…princess chalo go and change…n bed me chalo…
Princess – mom apne chart and copy lake nahi diya….
Priya – muje pta tha tum aate wahi puchogi….papa gye hai lene…
Mom – es waqt konsa dukkan khula hoga…dulhin…
Priya – muje bhi nahi pta maa…par bheja hai unhe…tum jaogi princess…change karogi ab..its getting late beta…n plz put ur new sandals in drawer…bahar chodi toh dekhna fir…tumse better ansh h…he keeps his things safely.
Mom looks after the house….beta kya kar rahi thi….abhi tak sab aise hi pada hai…
Priya – maa vo ansh ko sulate sulate…ankh lag gyi….abhi karti hu…
Mom – Phele khana …garam karke kha lo….ram ne bhi nahi khaya…tumne kuch khaya kya….
Priya – kaha maa…aake unhe samjhaya….bas fir room thik karne lagi toh ansh ke sath leti toh aankh lag gyi….
Priya  puts in microwave…and put sweet dish in fridge..

Ram calls…n priya ph rings….
Priya …hmm bolo..
Ram – kya hua…aise kyun bol rahi ho…
Priya – kam kar rahi hu …
Ram – koi shop ni khula…
Priya – khabardar jo aise aaye…vo abhi puchi h..mera chart or copy…
Ram – tum time se bol ni sakti thi….
Priya – behas karna jaruri hai es waqt….dusre block me ek shop hai…vo late tak khula rehta h…vaha dekho…
Ram – subah ladunga….
Priya – sorry I cant take risk…subah aap uthoge nahi muje pta hai…
Ram – kyun…tum raat bahar sone nahi dogi….
Priya – shut up…..kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho….
Ram – kyun….ab tumse puchke shuru hu kya…
Priya – baby…main khana gharam kar rahi hu….isme muje kuch paneer tikka jaisa najar aa raha h…khana hai toh chup chap se leke aao …samjee (in little serious tone)…and I think apko es waqt joro ki bhukh lagi hai naa…
Ram – chodunga nahi tumhe….samajhi….aake bata hu….
Priya – laughs…vo baad me dekhenge…phele leke toh aao….
Priya cuts the call…
Priya…asks grand father (gf) aapne kuch khana hai…ya garam kardu…
Gf – humko thoda dhokla de do…n salad…n ek glass laga do…
Priya – papa se bol du lagane ko…ya yeh aa jate hai…kar denge…
Gf - nahi…tum hi kardo…isme kaisi problem…
Priya – calls mom…in kitchen…baba ko drink chahiye…toh…papa ko bol dete….
Mom – vo so gye hai…tum kar do…ab tum is ghar ki bahu ho toh aadat dalni chahiye….yeh sab toh chalta hai….bado ki sewa karna banta hai naa
Somewhere priya gets irritated with this…
She takes the deep breath…
Sets a tray n she hates drinking, smoking, non veg.
But family was totally opposite to her.
Unwillingly she keep a glass in a tray…was going to open the bottle…of whisky…she was dying from smell. till then bell rang…she got relief…said to herself…thank god…aa gye..priya went n opened the door…

Ram comes in…n noticed tension on her face…
Tumhare chehre pe baraah kyun baje hai…kya hua…
Priya…vo naa….
Ram – kya hua bologi…
Priya – baba ko drink chahiye thi…
Ram – ram understood…n unhone tumhe kaha…karne ko…
Priya – hmm…looked down…
Ram – in angry tone goes to gf’s room…thodi der ruk nahi sakte the..aa raaha tha na….priya ko kyun bolte ho yeh sab karne ko….jab use pasand nahi…
Gf – humko chahiye tha….esliye bole…dulhin karti hai toh isme kya galat hai…
Ram – vo yeh sab nahi karegi…bol deta hu…jo chahiye muje bolo…main tyar karke dunga…
Gf – dulhin sewa bi nahi karegi …
Ram – gets more angry n says ….yeh sewa ka hissa nahi hai…samjee..
He calls mom loudly..
Mom – kya hua ram ….kyun gussa ho rahe ho…
Ram – baba ko bol dijiye….priya yeh sab nahi karegi…kyunki muje pasand nahi….
Mom – sewa karne me itni problem tumhe kyun ho rahi hai…
Ram – mere liye yeh sewa nahi h…priya …comes…bas kyun itna gussa ho rahe h…
Mom – dulhin tumhari wajah se hi mujse lad raha h …dekho…
Ram – apko lagta hai main galat hu…apko acha lagta hai apki bahu ya beti yeh bar tender banke serve kare…
Mom – muje es bare me kuch nahi bolna…
Ram – na meri behne yeh karengi na es ghar ki bahu…samjee…
Goes in his room in anger..

To be continued……

I request u all plz comment on my story….i wait for ur comments…I need ur luv …dear readers….plz comment…

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Superb story, it's moving very interesting. Read all the updates in one go. Continue soon & you written very well :)

CRK

Raya said...

Thank u so much for ur comments..
I really appreciate ur luv.
will continue soon.
with regards
sss

Unknown said...

Superb.. Y don't u write in English.. I am from chennai.. I can understand Hindi but some words are difficult to understand .. Don't worry I translate the a word and understand.. Continue soon.. Eagerly waitung

Raya said...

Ananthi k,
Thanks for ur lovely comment..
my english is not so gud..sorry but will try my best...
u can ask me if there any problem with words...
with regards
sss

Unknown said...

Ram Priya share very cute plus naughty bond so closed with each other
He gets angry to know that his grandfather asked her to serve drink.