Sunday, July 19, 2015

Magic Of Luv - Part 4

Mom – dulhin tumhari wajah se hi mujse lad raha h …dekho…
Ram – apko lagta hai main galat hu…apko acha lagta hai apki bahu ya beti yeh bar tender banke serve kare…
Mom – muje es bare me kuch nahi bolna…
Ram – na meri behne yeh karengi na es ghar ki bahu…samjee…
Goes in his room in anger..

Part 4…

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Ram goes in anger in his room….
Mom – jo beta apni maa se aaj tak ucha ni bola aaj vo tumhari wajah se mujse aise bol diya…..
Priya – toh aap kya chahti hai vo sari umar chup rehte…
Mom – pichle dus saal me usne kabhi awaz ni uthayi…
Priya – kyunki unhe compromise karne ki adat pad gyi thi...jo unhone saha h….apko ache se pta h….
Saying this she goes to her room….
She closes the door n says…to ram…kya jarurat thi maa se aise bolne ki….
Ram – tum vo sab karo muje pasand nahi...
Priya – par maa se aise bat kyunki…
Ram – kyuki unhe yeh galat nahi lagta…kyunki unhe yeh samaj ni aa raha ki yeh sewa nahi h…sewa dil se hoti hai…aise ni…
Priya cums n hugs him tightly…bas baby….moves hands on his back n make him calm…bahut gussa kar liyaa aaj ….its our anniversary yaar..3 years lag gye….hume…
Ram calms down…achaa…priya rubs her nose …with his nose…n both shares a lovely eye lock…n ram pulls her more close …n kisses his lips…priya too kisses him back…both kissed passionately n they broke…when princess…knocks the door…n standing there…both get embarrassed….ram says…tumne door lock ni kiya tha….priya stares him…muje yeh hoga ni pta tha….
Priya says to princess- chalo princess sone chale…before she starts asking questions…
Princess – mom vo aap n dad kya kar rahe the….
Priya – beta nothing…closes her eyes…
Princess – I know u both were kissing …
Priya – she widen up her eyes at her answer….how u know…?
Princess – I saw in a movie…
Priya – oh….so see things like this…takes her to bed….make her cover with duvet…says…beta aissi chize nahi dekhte…abhi aap bahut chote ho…jab apka time aayega mom will tell u everything..sleep now..
Princess –ok…gudnite…
Priya – gudnite beta…kiss her forhead…make her sleep…

Start thinking….again…
Flashback ….
Priya….cuts the calls…n says…itni bhi buri awaz nahi thi….
Ram – hayee…kitni sweet hai..but ram says to himself….she loves somebody else…
Then for many days both got busy in there lives…n when priya got time she left a msg for him…
Ram – replied to her – was busy somewhere….so time nahi mila….but missed u…
After few days priya got to know he is cuming to his mothers place …with his kids as father was not fine….n in holidays…he always stay at his mothers place…
Ram was feeling something different after he started talking with priya…but was not able to understand what feeling was he going through…he asked casually…tum milne aaogi mujse….priya said abhi kuch keh nahi sakti…

Ram gave the news…he has reached to his house…
Priya…gud…
Priya was busy with his lover….but after days…whn ram’s dad got admitted…in hospital….priya got concerned a lot…n she started giving him more attention.
When priya was telling him…about his lover…she told him…usne abhi tak muje thik se propose bhi nahi kiya…ram told her many childhood incidents…one was “his childhood frnd…ram likes her…both used to sit together…one day…an ant died on there seat..…he said to her…”holding chiti in his hand…tum muje chiti ka papa toh nahi banagi naa” …both laughed…..while talking to him. …priya felt that she is getting attracted towards him…y she thinks so much for him….
Both used to talk for many hours…one day in morng….priya came out from home…in early morng….n called…him….she wanted to listen his voice…just for that…she called him…
He was in hospital…his dad was sitting near him…when saw her call…
Now he thought how to excuse himself….
He lied to dad…dad main kuch khake aata hu…bahut tired hu…
Dad – ok….
He went downstairs …very fastly…n called him back…
Priya – kaha the…kitni call ki uthaya kyun ni….
Ram – vo dad pass me the…sorry
Priya – its ok….
Ram – hows u…
Priya – fine… n aap?
Ram – theek hu…itni subah kaise call ki…
Priya – bas aise hi..socha puch lu dad kaise h…
Ram – dad thik h ab…
Priya – kuch puchu…apki wife nahi aayi sath me….
Ram – nahi..vo apni mom ke pass gyi h…
Priya – n kids aapke sath kyun…
Ram – unhe meri adat hai…vo dadi ke pass bahut enjoy karte hai…n mom unhe ache se handle karti hai…vo yaha jyada khush rehte hai…
Priya – toh aap apne mom dad ke pass kyun ni rehte…
Ram – aisse hi…
Priya understood n changed the topic…ek said ek baat bolu ..
Ram – kya
Priya – vo mera apki awaz sunne ka dil kar raha tha…
Ram – sacchi…aisa kyun…
Priya – I dnt know…y..but I liked ur voice….
Ram smiled n thought to himself…muje bi tumhe sunna bahut pasand hai…
and  they talked for few mins more...ram’s smile was different…
When he went upstairs…his dad asked – kya hua beta bahut khush ho…
Ram – kuch nahi dad….aisse  hi…
Dad – kya khaya …
Ram thought to himself….vo toh bhul hi gya…

Its was 27 april…both were talking online….
Ram n priya were joking to each other…somewhere priya started feeling something for him…but that was love or just attraction…ram started liking her…but was not sure…y this is happening to him…ram was not able to understand was it love or like or whats going ….feeling which missed for last 10 years…kuch toh alag ho raaha tha…koi uski soyi hui feelings jaga rahi thi…koi uski banayi sarhadein tod rahi thi….jis ehsaas se uska wasta na tha…koi thi jo usko vo ehsaas de rahi thi….
suddenly…ram said text her…”bending on my knees…holding a red rose in my hand…I love u ..priya…”…

to be continued….

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Friday, July 3, 2015

Magic of Luv - part 3

Part 3
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PRECAP
ram - ja raha hu naa...ajeeb musibat gale padi h....
priya - so swt my golu....
ram - khabardar jo golu boli..toh dekh lo....
               
Part3
Priya : bolungi….kya karoge…tease him….
Ram : sochlo fir…
Priya: acha abhi jao nahi toh or late ho jaoge
Ram :  jata hu na…tumhe naa…was trying to say something….as priya stares him….takes his wallet n key quietly…n goes …ja raha hu…ghuro mat ab…
Priya : laughs….gud hubby…

Ram goes and priya closes the door…and turns n looks the house…all toys messed up…says to herself…chal priya shuru ho ja…yr yeh bache naa…kitna saman nikalte hai…jo nikalte hai sab bahar…
Pick up few toys….and goes in kids room n..keep it on the place…look the bed…yeh princess bi ….kitne kapde nikalwati hai…nakhare toh baap ki tarah hai….kuch pasand hi nahi aata jaldi se….and wahi mera ansh…jo nikal do phen leta hai….luks ansh sleeping…goes near him….n kiss him softly…aaj kitna smart lag raha tha…
Takes him in her arms n sit on bed…n thinks….what happened 3 years ago…agar us din aap nahi milte toh shyad yeh zindagi bhi nahi milti….

Flashback….more than 3 years ago..
Today is the world of internet….and social networking ….so linking my story with that…new world of social sites….

Ram and priya used to live in metro cities but not in one city. Both were busy in their lives. Priya used to like someone…but was not sure…about her own feelings..a person whom she liked or loved. She was fond of a serial …tv serial…she liked the story and imagine herself like that.  Her family was conservative in nature. She was not allowed to go out and make frnds. Then she got connected with social networking sites. Where she used to interact with few of her frnds. Where she met Ram…firstly she was not interested in adding him in frnd list. Then later she added him. He was different from others. They started talking. She knew he is a married man with two kids. So, there was no feelings for a relationship. She liked somebody else so she never thought like this nor Ram. In four months ram n priya became gud frnds but till then also Ram didn’t let him know about his problems.
Ram never told about his family problems in the beginning. Then priya told ram that she liked somebody but donot know how to express her feeling nor she was sure that person liked him or not.
Ram said – sidhe se jake puch lo naa…
Priya – kaise puchu…is it so easy….
Ram – dekho yeh tumhe hi karna hai…
Priya – hmm…ok will try…
 Then priya did the same…as ram told him… Priya proposed him…he accepted priyas proposal…priya was very happy.
Priya told everything to Ram…and said bcz of him she is so much happy.
Ram was also not aware of the feeling taking place for priya in his heart. Somewhere he started liking her.

Both likes to spend time with each other. When ram gets time from his work he comes online and talk with her. Then ram gave his number. But both didn’t call each other. One day priya thought of giving him a surprise…and wanted to wish  holi..by calling him…
ram was happy this year…so he played holi….after many years… priya wished him in morng…later she called him….
His wife was not there…ram picked the call…without seeing the number he picked it…
Ram… hello…
Priya….hi….kaise ho aap
Ram …whoz this…
Priya…..phechano….ur spl frnd
Ram …..ohhh toh tum ho…he smiled while saying this…
Priya …phechan liya…smiling…
Ram….kaise yaad kiya aaj…
Priya….socha surprise de du..holi bolke wish kardu…
Ram …achaa…aisa kya
Priya….happy holi….
Ram…same to you….
Both talked for at least half hour….both enjoyed talking to each other.

Priyas thought broke whn door bell rang.
Priya goes to open the door. Its mom n dad…with princess and grandfather.
Mom – dulhin ram thik hai handing her gift and packed food
Priya – ji maa…vo thik hai…princess chalo go and change…n bed me chalo…
Princess – mom apne chart and copy lake nahi diya….
Priya – muje pta tha tum aate wahi puchogi….papa gye hai lene…
Mom – es waqt konsa dukkan khula hoga…dulhin…
Priya – muje bhi nahi pta maa…par bheja hai unhe…tum jaogi princess…change karogi ab..its getting late beta…n plz put ur new sandals in drawer…bahar chodi toh dekhna fir…tumse better ansh h…he keeps his things safely.
Mom looks after the house….beta kya kar rahi thi….abhi tak sab aise hi pada hai…
Priya – maa vo ansh ko sulate sulate…ankh lag gyi….abhi karti hu…
Mom – Phele khana …garam karke kha lo….ram ne bhi nahi khaya…tumne kuch khaya kya….
Priya – kaha maa…aake unhe samjhaya….bas fir room thik karne lagi toh ansh ke sath leti toh aankh lag gyi….
Priya  puts in microwave…and put sweet dish in fridge..

Ram calls…n priya ph rings….
Priya …hmm bolo..
Ram – kya hua…aise kyun bol rahi ho…
Priya – kam kar rahi hu …
Ram – koi shop ni khula…
Priya – khabardar jo aise aaye…vo abhi puchi h..mera chart or copy…
Ram – tum time se bol ni sakti thi….
Priya – behas karna jaruri hai es waqt….dusre block me ek shop hai…vo late tak khula rehta h…vaha dekho…
Ram – subah ladunga….
Priya – sorry I cant take risk…subah aap uthoge nahi muje pta hai…
Ram – kyun…tum raat bahar sone nahi dogi….
Priya – shut up…..kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho….
Ram – kyun….ab tumse puchke shuru hu kya…
Priya – baby…main khana gharam kar rahi hu….isme muje kuch paneer tikka jaisa najar aa raha h…khana hai toh chup chap se leke aao …samjee (in little serious tone)…and I think apko es waqt joro ki bhukh lagi hai naa…
Ram – chodunga nahi tumhe….samajhi….aake bata hu….
Priya – laughs…vo baad me dekhenge…phele leke toh aao….
Priya cuts the call…
Priya…asks grand father (gf) aapne kuch khana hai…ya garam kardu…
Gf – humko thoda dhokla de do…n salad…n ek glass laga do…
Priya – papa se bol du lagane ko…ya yeh aa jate hai…kar denge…
Gf - nahi…tum hi kardo…isme kaisi problem…
Priya – calls mom…in kitchen…baba ko drink chahiye…toh…papa ko bol dete….
Mom – vo so gye hai…tum kar do…ab tum is ghar ki bahu ho toh aadat dalni chahiye….yeh sab toh chalta hai….bado ki sewa karna banta hai naa
Somewhere priya gets irritated with this…
She takes the deep breath…
Sets a tray n she hates drinking, smoking, non veg.
But family was totally opposite to her.
Unwillingly she keep a glass in a tray…was going to open the bottle…of whisky…she was dying from smell. till then bell rang…she got relief…said to herself…thank god…aa gye..priya went n opened the door…

Ram comes in…n noticed tension on her face…
Tumhare chehre pe baraah kyun baje hai…kya hua…
Priya…vo naa….
Ram – kya hua bologi…
Priya – baba ko drink chahiye thi…
Ram – ram understood…n unhone tumhe kaha…karne ko…
Priya – hmm…looked down…
Ram – in angry tone goes to gf’s room…thodi der ruk nahi sakte the..aa raaha tha na….priya ko kyun bolte ho yeh sab karne ko….jab use pasand nahi…
Gf – humko chahiye tha….esliye bole…dulhin karti hai toh isme kya galat hai…
Ram – vo yeh sab nahi karegi…bol deta hu…jo chahiye muje bolo…main tyar karke dunga…
Gf – dulhin sewa bi nahi karegi …
Ram – gets more angry n says ….yeh sewa ka hissa nahi hai…samjee..
He calls mom loudly..
Mom – kya hua ram ….kyun gussa ho rahe ho…
Ram – baba ko bol dijiye….priya yeh sab nahi karegi…kyunki muje pasand nahi….
Mom – sewa karne me itni problem tumhe kyun ho rahi hai…
Ram – mere liye yeh sewa nahi h…priya …comes…bas kyun itna gussa ho rahe h…
Mom – dulhin tumhari wajah se hi mujse lad raha h …dekho…
Ram – apko lagta hai main galat hu…apko acha lagta hai apki bahu ya beti yeh bar tender banke serve kare…
Mom – muje es bare me kuch nahi bolna…
Ram – na meri behne yeh karengi na es ghar ki bahu…samjee…
Goes in his room in anger..

To be continued……

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Wednesday, July 1, 2015

Magic Of Luv - Part 2

PART 2
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Precap…

Sonia wished ram “happy anniversary”…n hugs her. Ram too hugs her back and priya was feeling jealous. And giving a fake smile. Ram luvs to tease her. Ram was facing priya..n smiling….ram was enjoying her expressions…and was thinks “j factor still works” n laughs….

Part 2

He leaves Sonia n looks priya’s face…Sonia says main priya ko wish karke aati hu…. Move towards priya….priya looks her n gives a smile n tries to hide her jealously. Meanwhile ram talks to his husband n kids…(rams kids n sonias kids were gud frnds. 3 years ago ram and Sonia used to live in same building where they became good frnds. So there kids were also gud frnds)

Sonia hugs her n wish her happy anniversary…..priya too hugs her back  says thanks ……sonia…thanks mere dost ko sambhalne ke liye…
Priya….apka dost meri life hai…..
Sonia…usne bahut muskil se hasna shuru kiya hai…..use akela mat chodna….
Priya…nahi chodungi…..both looks at ram smiling with all four kids…

Then Sharma makes announcement for dance …..all cheers…

Ram…who runs from dancing…priya too….both try to hide themselves…they both never lived like this ever before…then junior ram comes on dj floor and princess both were fond of dancing.
 Sonia holds ram’s hand and priya’s hand…chalo…today is ur day enjoy it naa…brings them on dance floor.

 Ram started making faces to priya …priya said in her ear…”muje chida rahe the…ab fas gye na….”
Everybodys eyes were on them n juniours….ram wanted to run from this situation…but priya holds him camly and says in his ear…”bharosa hai na mujpe..” Ram….haan …looks in her eyes..priya blinks her eyes….ram got relaxed…..priya asks him to hold her from waist and keeps her hands on his shoulders. Ram did the same…
One of my fav song started…

Hmm.. hmm...
Ram moved with priya…slowly….slowly on the beats…

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum
Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam

Ram started moving along priya n both were lost in each other…..n  both were looking in each others eyes and dancing.(Both were smiling)

Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

….
 Hmmm.. hmmm..
Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

(Both forgot that everybody were looking at them only. Ram holds her little tightly n pulls priya more close from her waist . Priya was lost in his touch) 

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...
Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

(Ram was about to kiss her…then only somebody clapped from behind……very loudly…ram  and priya came to reality…turns towards the voice….it was none other than his ex - wife…Ram was not expecting her on this day)

Ram ‘s Ex- wife : Nidhi : A selfish woman who has no feelings for his husband and kids.

Ram s expression changes he leaves priya, and moves towards her.
Nidhi : looking nice with ur new wife…turns towards…priya…jyada der is insaan ke sath ni reh paogi…thodi toh sharam karti do bacho ka baap hai…kaise fasaya tumne ise…high class family ka hai esliye….ya sure tum me hi koi kami hogi….as she said this ram was about to slap her…Priya holds his hand…..nahi…aap aisa kuch nahi karenge…

Ram says….jo bolna hai muje bolo…priya se ek word ni bologi…

Nidhi : Itna pyar…!!!!...AAJ KAL KAHA DEKHNE KO MILTA HAI…!!!

Priya : haan ni milta dekhne ko….agar tumne kiya hota…lekin tumne toh kiya hi nahi…ur chapter is over….so just leave…yeh mere husband hai….yeh kaise insaan hai tumhe batane ki jarurat nahi…maine shadi kyun ki yeh tumhe samjhana jaruri nahi samajati…meanwhile.. ansh comes and holds priyas hand n call her mom.muje bhukh lagi hai…chalo naa…priya picks him in her arms...n ask ansh to wish nidhi…ansh inhe wish karo n inke pair chuho…ansh gets down from her arms do the same…Krishna ji cums and take ansh along with him.

Ram says to nidhi…yeh tumhe es liye respect nahi de raha hai bcz u deserve …esliye bcz priya ne use yeh karne ko kaha hai….i guess …tumhe tumhara jawab mil gya hoga …toh ja sakti ho…kyun bar bar aati ho….kyun interfare karti ho meri life mein…kyun chain se muje jine nahi deti…

Nidhi : Itni asani se muje bhul jao yeh bhi to sahi nahi….
Ram : just leave now.
Nidhi says …ram tumne jo kiya hai u will have to pay for it…and leaves from there.

All Sharma’s get upset but party was not over.
Ram controlled his anger and asked mom to handle all the guests…
Priya was feeding both the kids.  Priya’s eyes were searching for ram..but there was no sign of ram, anywhere. Priya knew ram is not fine…she asked mom….whr is ram…
Priya – beta vo chala gya….mom aap yeh sab dekh lengi toh main ghar jau….ram ko meri jarurat hai. Ansh ko sath le jati hu…yeh so jayega.
Mom – Thik hai beta…mom sab gifts wahi rakhe h…aapko jaise thik lage sab de dena.

Priya drives to Sharma house….taking ansh along with her.
Priya goes upstairs…n see door open.
She goes to kids room n make ansh sleep. She covers him and comes to their room.

Look ram standing alone in balcony….
She goes n hugs him from behind…ram in very serious tone and anger says priya chodo…muje is waqt kissi se baat nahi karni….
Priya – agar na chodu toh….
Ram – ab khush ho…na…tum hi yeh sab chahti thi na….ban gya tamasha sab ke samne….removing her hands….
Turns around her…dur raho mujse….jid tumhari hi thi na…or manao anniversary…mana kar raha tha tumse lekin nahi…tumhe apni jid puri hi karni hai….ab khush…ho gyi tumhari jid puri….
Priya – meri baat toh suno…

Ram goes and ly on bed...priya looks him ...from balcony door...he changes the direction....priya smiles and goes to change.... 
After changing priya comes to him n holds his hand...and says ...muje pta hai aap so nahi rahe hai...I know apko kya bura laga....yehi ki usne mere bare me kuch bola....baby....dekho na meri taraf...
ram - muje nahi dekhna...
priya - arrey dekho toh...or suno meri baat...
ram -  nahi dekhna....bola naa...
priya - dekho nahi toh golu bulaungi....mottu bhi....
ram - dur ho jao ek dum...samjhi...khabardar jo mere pass aai...
priya - holds his hands n moves close to him ...gives him a gentle kiss ..on his lips..lo apki sweet dish.....ab bhi nahi dekhoge....
ram - nahi chahiye....hatto...tries to get up...
priya - holds his face in her palms n says....uski soch hum nahi badal sakte...nahi hum uski wajah se jeena chod sakte...apko mujpe bharosa hai naa....
ram - khud se jyada...
priya - toh fir....baby let her go...let ur past go...just live in ur present...and i m ur present.
ram hugs her tightly...muje acha ni lagta jab koi tumhare bare me aise bolta hai...tumhe pta hai naa....
priya - haan pta h....hugs him more tightly. Acha ab chodo....mom aane wali h...sara ghar messed up hai...let me clean that...
ram - abhi karna jaruri hai....
priya - haan...ansh so gya hai....princess aayegi toh use aap sula dena...main kam khatam karlu tab tak ...fir kal dono ka school bhi hai....oh shitt...
ram - kya hua...
priya - main bhul gyi....princess ne muje chart and copy lane ko kaha tha....anniversary ki tyari me...bhul gyi...aayegi n fir meri class lagayegi.. ram please go na....ek chart paper...and ek copy...
ram - oh madam....dukkan tumhare pati ki nahi h ki jab dil kare chali jao...
time dekha h....
priya - aap uthoge...in serious tone...koi toh shop khula hoga...
ram - priya plz i m not going ....
ram - aap uthoge...gets up from his chest...n stares him badly...arrey yaar yeh kya musibat hai....says slowly in his mouth
priya - apne kuch kaha....
ram - ja raha hu naa...ajeeb musibat gale padi h....
priya - so swt my golu....
ram - khabardar jo golu boli..toh dekh lo....


To be continued…